The pursuit of happiness is a chase for a lifetime..
Nov 12, 2008
…night, cold sand…nothing in sound, sound of river…words, empty echo…clutched hands, fingers…raw fear, ageless… tear drop, wet lash… midnight, by watch…
love, in arms… feel, the breaths... your eyes, my life... halt, my travel… wish, on a broken star…
…my world, you!
posted by Rashi at 9:59 PM
20 Comments:
how do u do this every time...its far n in between yet everytime u manage to create magic wid words...u make d reader feel ur emotions...brilliant
its spellbinding... and yet...
I loved the broken flow...
am so there mate... oh is there a little fire circle too??? :)
Loved this mate... good one...
have a nice evening, cheers...
Rashi,
I could not agree with you more on the title of this post.
Take care
Felt like doing "fill in the blanks" as v did in school. Bt ur broken lines speak a complete story.
>>my world, you!
These 3 words r amazing....they say tonnes of truth.
wao....i love the way your blog looks...one of the best colours!
lovely post too....got here randomly..!!
awesome!!! :-)
Lovely :)
My first visit here and i must say this is lovely blog....
i am speechless....
hey smthn awaits u on my 100th post :)
hey visit this blog :
lifebeyondobvious.blogspot.com
the other one is cricket blog :)
Cheers,
Sam
first timer...nice posts u have done ..:)...and this post has lot of depth with words playin around :)...
urs..hemu..
awesome madame...
p.s. love your blog layout!
If you took this superb picture, it is I who am in awe, Rashi.
And yes, Stephen was a great help.
Sometimes the fewest of words say the most. Nicely done. :)
PS. Thanks for your nice comment on my blog.
I dont why..
but I find it romantic..
I just do.. :o
RASHI,
i jus read it n so many things jus flow thru moi blood....
its beautiful...
awesome layout as well...its jus toooo catchy!!!!
tc...
rugma....
hi,
I came first time on your blog and i liked it very much. specially this post :""" wish, on a broken star… …my world, you!"""
congrts for good writing .
pls visit my blog : http://poemsofvijay.blogspot.com/ for some poems .
regards
vijay
hyderabad
india
WOW .. that was amaising...
lots more talent where that came from !!
Like I always said, you have the potential to be a full fledged writer for an English Classic yet to be written.
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