The pursuit of happiness is a chase for a lifetime..

Nov 12, 2008


…night, cold sand…nothing in sound, sound of river…words, empty echo…clutched hands, fingers…raw fear, ageless… tear drop, wet lash… midnight, by watch…

love, in arms… feel, the breaths... your eyes, my life... halt, my travel… wish, on a broken star…
…my world, you!
posted by Rashi at 9:59 PM

20 Comments:

how do u do this every time...its far n in between yet everytime u manage to create magic wid words...u make d reader feel ur emotions...brilliant

November 13, 2008 at 12:17 AM  

its spellbinding... and yet...

November 14, 2008 at 7:52 PM  

I loved the broken flow...

November 16, 2008 at 2:31 AM  

am so there mate... oh is there a little fire circle too??? :)

Loved this mate... good one...

have a nice evening, cheers...

November 19, 2008 at 5:29 AM  

Rashi,

I could not agree with you more on the title of this post.

Take care

November 20, 2008 at 3:25 AM  

Felt like doing "fill in the blanks" as v did in school. Bt ur broken lines speak a complete story.

>>my world, you!
These 3 words r amazing....they say tonnes of truth.

November 20, 2008 at 7:21 AM  

wao....i love the way your blog looks...one of the best colours!

lovely post too....got here randomly..!!

November 21, 2008 at 7:18 AM  

awesome!!! :-)

November 21, 2008 at 7:39 PM  

Lovely :)

My first visit here and i must say this is lovely blog....

November 24, 2008 at 6:23 AM  

i am speechless....

November 24, 2008 at 10:59 PM  

hey smthn awaits u on my 100th post :)

November 25, 2008 at 4:01 AM  

hey visit this blog :

lifebeyondobvious.blogspot.com

the other one is cricket blog :)

Cheers,

Sam

November 25, 2008 at 5:58 AM  

first timer...nice posts u have done ..:)...and this post has lot of depth with words playin around :)...

urs..hemu..

November 25, 2008 at 8:20 AM  

awesome madame...
p.s. love your blog layout!

November 25, 2008 at 8:26 AM  

If you took this superb picture, it is I who am in awe, Rashi.

And yes, Stephen was a great help.

November 25, 2008 at 10:16 AM  

Sometimes the fewest of words say the most. Nicely done. :)

PS. Thanks for your nice comment on my blog.

November 25, 2008 at 5:05 PM  

I dont why..
but I find it romantic..

I just do.. :o

December 16, 2008 at 4:27 AM  

RASHI,
i jus read it n so many things jus flow thru moi blood....
its beautiful...
awesome layout as well...its jus toooo catchy!!!!
tc...
rugma....

December 17, 2008 at 4:06 AM  

hi,

I came first time on your blog and i liked it very much. specially this post :""" wish, on a broken star… …my world, you!"""


congrts for good writing .

pls visit my blog : http://poemsofvijay.blogspot.com/ for some poems .

regards

vijay
hyderabad
india

December 25, 2008 at 11:08 PM  

WOW .. that was amaising...
lots more talent where that came from !!

Like I always said, you have the potential to be a full fledged writer for an English Classic yet to be written.

January 15, 2009 at 9:14 PM  

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