The pursuit of happiness is a chase for a lifetime..
Aug 25, 2008
And the thread missed the weave…
…with his own thoughts he sat outside his own mind
behind him was a world of his people he wanted to be in
his heart held his hand and eloped with emotions
which tangled with someone else’s
behind him was a world of his people he wanted to be in
his heart held his hand and eloped with emotions
which tangled with someone else’s
…he looks into the mirror of blue water
basks in the love of love; frowns to the poke of his silly lover
and behind him he left the fabric of his home
the world especially will identify him of the same…so what if he missed the weave...so...what...!!
posted by Rashi at 12:57 AM
20 Comments:
I loved the way the thoughts were woven into words in this one..Intriguing...
he might have missed the weave , but seems he still holds on !!
waise yuhi keh diya, jaisa samjaha !
~Rahul
Rashi,
Well said.
Take care
interesting..
i liked these lines..
~his heart held his hand and eloped with emotions
which tangled with someone else’s~
keep writing..!!
It is better to be enrobed in one's own fabric which might not be of that good quality,than be confined in the luxurious threads of another.
So much emotion put in so few words....Beautiful. Real deep.
I am seasick so don't miss any waves. :D
yeah so wat if he missed it?? life still goes on too..
great post yaar.. eons since im visiting your blog(sorry for that)
will be a regular here from now on..
wow...
U have ur way with the words...
... "and the thread missed the weave .."
Nicely put! Somehow I feel it’s a reminder that - The sense of incompleteness is always hard but aging at the same time it helps us facing the reality.
:)
gud 1 thr!
amazing thought and nicely woven
hi Rashi
A lot of sensibility in these words!
kelly
ahh.. so touching!
Wonderfully done :-)
I read it FOUR times and each time i interpreted it slightly differently 2 different situations each situation in two different emotions and considering it's only 8 lines that made me ponder so much ...he he NICE !
I loved the way u ended it ...
"so what if he missed the weave...so...what."
thats the final thing .. If one regrets then his lifes gone waste .. if one bears all and yet does not regret .. there we have a meaningful life..
Impressive..
Thanks for visiting my page, hope to c u around :)
Take care
it makes one think, so many emotions put in there.. wonderfully said :)
long time....no new post:)
Good one....
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