The pursuit of happiness is a chase for a lifetime..

Oct 13, 2009

I wanna sleep sound !



Tonight, I will rest as I would...rest forever.
My eyes have seen some life, though,
I would still rest like never before.
Tonight, I will dream of you again...did I say ‘again’?

To you and to me...love spelled life,
I still understand love the same way...I know your meaning, too, hasn’t changed...

‘You’ will I name...if they seek answer to my wish...my last.



posted by Rashi at 11:15 AM

8 Comments:

wow brilliant rashi :)
loved the last line..of "You" being the last wish..lovelyyy :)

October 28, 2009 at 2:30 AM  

Nice one!
especially "you" as the final wish..
like the twist.
wishes

November 6, 2009 at 9:17 PM  

lovely.. mesmerizing.. and that too in so few words ..

November 6, 2009 at 10:37 PM  

That's painful and yet so poetic :)

November 8, 2009 at 1:44 AM  

Hi Rashi, thankyou for your comment on my blog....and wow, what can i find here but emotions??.significant emotions!!
keep it up Rashi!!

November 11, 2009 at 2:43 AM  

Woh ho!
Brilliant piece man!!

How u beeen?

November 19, 2009 at 2:34 AM  

your words have depth ya, and i like that, very good :)


take care and keep writing...........

November 24, 2009 at 2:24 AM  

Very deep and intense.

November 30, 2009 at 11:30 AM  

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